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Monday 3 June 2013

The horse ride
By Ethan Farrell room 11



Did you ever have a ride on a creature that is bigger than you, that can run fast, and has sharp teeth?  Have you ridden a creature that is scary?   I did. It was so horrifying.  Let me tell you about it.
At Forrest lacks me and my friend Matt went on some horses the one I went on was called Bob
We went around a big lack. All so the horse ran in front of the horse it was so horrifying. Because I nerly fall off.
I hope you don’t get horrify like I did.  

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4 comments:

  1. Mr Corlett3 June 2013 at 22:27

    Hi! Ethan, starting the story with a question mark was a great way to start - it hooks in your audience.
    Mr C

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  2. Anonymous4 June 2013 at 19:10

    cool:):):):)

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  3. Anonymous4 June 2013 at 19:10

    hi ethan cool story

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