Welcome to this Room 11 blog. Our learning philosophy is to LEARN, CREATE an artifact that shows our learning, and then SHARE it in creative ways, including posting it here on this blog.The purpose of this blog is for students to become accustomed to sharing their learning, recieving feedback, and preparing them for having their very own blog.While students will make every effort to have work corrected and error free it is in fact authentic student work, showing where students are at, and so there are likely to be some mistakes. The aim is to note progress and improvement, and we expect to see this over time.

Thursday, 27 June 2013

orienteering


on Wednesday the year 5 and year 6 went on the bus to  orienteering  i went with Patrick most people went up the hill. flag 15 is close to flag 20 for kids that are going next year or the year after that as yr you see a high hill with grey gravel  you can you back or you can go up my buddy Patrick went up it a bit then went down because he thought there was nothing up there and then went down there was a lot of horse poo along   the way not that its the star of the story then after climbing up a steep hill we got to a fence i used the style but Patrick said no there's Poison i read the warning  it said there are poison carcasses around do not let your dog go near the dead body i looked around there was no dead body near the style i was thinking are you crazy read the warning board at the end of the orienteering we all went back to class and that's all for now do you like my voice imprison.



by peter

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  1. Mr Corlett30 June 2013 at 01:54

    Dear Peter,
    You have some interest observations in your story - such as the part about the poison signs, and how people went different ways. Your next step is to try and find the places to put some full stops so that it breaks your work into sentences - you can ask me for help if you are not sure. I enjoy your stories and would love for you to do some more posts on our class blog.

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