One day Lucy, Tj and Emily were in a taxi on their way to
River Riding Waterpark. Emily was scared with snakes in her stomach, but Tj and
Lucy were getting excited to get on “Amazon Waterfall” Waterslide. At last they
got to the waterpark! “Let’s go in the pool to get used to the water first?”
Said Lucy. “Sure” Replied Tj. “Wait, we can’t go in the pool with our clothes
on!” I cried. “You mean… We go in the pool with NO clothes on?” Frowned Tj.
“No! We need to go to the changing rooms to get changed first.” So off they
went. When they came out they cannonballed into the pool. “HEY YOU!” Yelled
someone from the side of the pool. “Me? Her?” Said Lucy. “Yeah, you two,” Said
someone in a yellow shirt. It was a lifeguard! “No jumping in the pool please.”
“Fine.” Groaned Lucy and Tj. Emily came walking behind Tj and Lucy. “Guys, do
you want to go on the waterslide now?” Emily shivered. “Okay. We will go first
so you can see how fun it will be!” Smiled Tj. “Good idea, Tj.” So all 3 of the
girls walked up the stairs to the waterslide. There was no queue! “YAY!”
Cheered the girls in harmony. “Jinks!”
Yelled Emily. “We’re under a roof,” Sighed Lucy “So I guess we can’t
jinks right now.” “Aww” Said Emily. It was now time for Tj to go down. “Watch
and learn my children, watch and learn.” Laughed Tj, as she pushed herself down
the waterslide. We couldn’t see Tj come out of the slide when we watched the
camera, so the lifeguard told Lucy to go down and see if she was alright. Off
Lucy went, down the slide. Emily waited multiple minutes, but she couldn’t see
Lucy come out either! “You go down too, maybe the water stopped half way down”
Sighed the lifeguard. “Alright then,” “Here I go!” Emily held her breath as she
pushed herself down. “Weeee!” Grinned Emily. Suddenly everything went black and
there was a big splash. The sun beamed in Emily’s eyes. “I’m not in the
waterpark anymore!” Emily suddenly saw Lucy and Tj walking towards her. “Where
are we!!??” She cried, seeming stunned. “Don’t you know? We end up here at the
end! That is why it’s called the ‘Amazon Waterfall’!” Smiled Tj and Lucy.
“There is a house that I hire for when we come here, so we could stay there
until the gates open again.” Said Tj. “Wait. What gates? Do our parents know
about this?” Worried Emily. “The gates close when the waterpark closes, and
they open as the waterpark opens. The guards watch 2 days a week, and today
they’re watching, and tomorrow, but luckily not the next day. We’ll leave in
the next 2 days or so. And the parent thing, yeah. Well… Sort of. Not really.
They think we’re at a friend’s house.” Said Tj. “Well, let’s go to the house
now. It’s a mansion!” This made Emily much happier and confident once she heard
it was a mansion! At last they got to the house. It was big and was 3 stories
high! “Well, here we are.” Grinned Lucy. They all ran around, shouting ‘I dibs
this room!’ until at last they all had a room.
It was getting dark, but the kids wanted to get into the
pool. They were still in their togs, and they knew there was no lifeguard’s here
so they did dive-bombs and cannonballs in the pool until midnight. For some
reason, these weird building tools appeared in their hands, so they started
building a huge land above the house! They also added a ladder so they could
climb it. “Let’s climb it now!” Yelled Emily from half way up the ladder. “And
by climb it, I mean climb it ALL THE WAY UP.” “Okay! Great idea! I can’t wait!”
Lucy and Tj responded. Up the climbed, the big white ladder. “Kids! Hello
there!” Came a voice from down below. “Come down here, I would like to help you
out.” “Okay…” Said the kids as they climbed down the ladder. “Would you like me to hold these keys for you? I
really know how fragile they are.” Smiled the lady, sweetly. “Oh, no thanks,
we’re good.” Said Lucy and Tj. But there was Emily, handing the lady the keys
to the house. “NOOOOO!!!!” Yelled Tj and Lucy, furiously. The lady ran to the
house and used the key to get in, and she locked the door when she got in.
“Ugh, thanks Emily. Now where are we going to stay?” Moaned Lucy. “I have an
idea.” Grinned Emily. They stayed in the pool until they heard the alarms go
off 2 days later, and they saw the waterslide open, and up they climbed. “That was
the BEST TRIP EVER!” Screamed all of them.
By Lucy, RM 11.
Hi! Lucy,
ReplyDeleteI liked the part about feeling like she had "snakes in her stomach" because it is quite expressive. Some people talk about having butterflies - but snakes seems so much more powerful as a way to express really strong feelings.
Mr C
Nice work
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