27.6.13
orienteering report
liezel cundy
year 5-6 orienteering
this report is about orienteering the fun way to learn how to read a map and to have fun.
on tuesday the 24th of june all the year fives and sixes from waikanae, kapiti, kapanui and te ra school went to waikanae park for orienteering.All the kids were given a starting time and then when Miss Brown said go ,you see children running to try find flag’s “it was really fun, it was hard to find the flags so me and my partner ioana mihlia were just looking for a flags because the map was too hard to follow” said kenza si-lounis. “i was really run” screamed all the year 5-6 waikanae students.
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Dear Liezel,
ReplyDeleteI think you did a good introduction. There was a problem in the body of your report - the bit where it says "i was really run" which shows that you need to read through what you write BEFORE you post. Then you would probably notice other things like the missing capital letters too. I'll look forward to your next report.