This is an exciting blog from Room 11 children giving them the opportunity to learn, create and share their discoveries.
Welcome to this Room 11 blog. Our learning philosophy is to LEARN, CREATE an artifact that shows our learning, and then SHARE it in creative ways, including posting it here on this blog.The purpose of this blog is for students to become accustomed to sharing their learning, recieving feedback, and preparing them for having their very own blog.While students will make every effort to have work corrected and error free it is in fact authentic student work, showing where students are at, and so there are likely to be some mistakes. The aim is to note progress and improvement, and we expect to see this over time.
Charlie's Blog
This is a blog space for Charlie to show his work. It will be work-in-progress and your feedback will help Charlie think about and edit his work.
Hi! Jemma, you have suggested Charlie do some more work. Do you mean he needs to post more stories or do you mean he needs to do some more work on a story he has already posted? If it is to do more work on a current storythen what would you suggest he focus on? - Mr C
Cockatiels by Charlie Most cockatiels have an orange spot on their cheek. A cockatiels life span is usually 15 to 20 years old. The oldest cockatiel lived to 32 years old. They have a lot shorter life than us. Most cockatiels are found in Australia or Tasmania they are usually found in corners of islands not in the middle. The cockatiels attitude is very greedy .Like if they want to sleep they will need a big bed. They all ways want more than they need. People like having them as pet because they are very intelligent. by Charlie
i like how you said that people like haveing them as a pet becuse there intelligent.\ but i think you should put a little bit more information andi really like how you said how long they live
Matariki This report will show you all about matariki.
Matariki is the name of one of the seven sisters. The Japanese call these seven sisters Subaru.
The stars normally come out at Maori New Year and it is still celebrated now. The seven sisters are evil because they tried to kill the maori chef. Maoris celebrate matariki by dancing. Matariki is celebrated between the 14th and the 16th of June.
Orienteering report Orienteering on tuesday the 25th of june the year 5,6,7,8ts from a few schools of kapiti went to waikanae park to do some fun orienteering .there were 570 kids.
then they all started with a map and where set of at different times so they won't all go to the same clicker.they all had to run a long way to get to number 2 and 9 they were over the other side.
the first group back from waikanae was Marcus Dean and Jasmine and second place was vlad and charlie but it was so close so they called it a tie.this is charlies perspective.
orienteering was so fun we say it was a tie because we worked together.then it started we all started at different times but when we started what a rush to all the clickers in full speed.then finally the last clicker number 16 next we all ran to the finish the two teams were so close that they called it a tie then we sat there and waited for the bus just amazed that we won.
thank you for reading this report on orienteering hope you liked it .By Charlie
cool blog but you need to work on it more
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ReplyDeleteMost cockatiels have an orange spot on their cheek.
A cockatiels life span is usually 15 to 20 years old. The oldest cockatiel lived to 32 years old. They have a lot shorter life than us.
Most cockatiels are found in Australia or Tasmania they are usually found in corners of islands not in the middle.
The cockatiels attitude is very greedy .Like if they want to sleep they will need a big bed. They all ways want more than they need.
People like having them as pet because they are very intelligent.
by Charlie
i like how you said that people like haveing them as a pet becuse there intelligent.\
Deletebut i think you should put a little bit more information
andi really like how you said how long they live
nice work charlie
Deletegood work charlie
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ReplyDeletegood luck charlie
ReplyDeletecharlie you have nothing on your blog
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ReplyDeletehi Charlie why haven't you done anything on your blog
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ReplyDeleteThis report will show you all about matariki.
Matariki is the name of one of the seven sisters. The Japanese call these seven sisters Subaru.
The stars normally come out at Maori New Year and it is still celebrated now. The seven sisters are evil because they tried to kill the maori chef.
Maoris celebrate matariki by dancing. Matariki is celebrated between the 14th and the 16th of June.
Sisters names:
Waiti
Waita
Tupu-a-nuku
Taupu-a-rangi
Waipun-a-a-rangi
Ururangi
Matariki
Thank you for reading this report matariki I hope you learnt something .
By Charlie
cool matariki story
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on tuesday the 25th of june the year 5,6,7,8ts from a few schools of kapiti went to waikanae park to do some fun orienteering .there were 570 kids.
then they all started with a map and where set of at different times so they won't all go to the same clicker.they all had to run a long way to get to number 2 and 9 they were over the other side.
the first group back from waikanae was Marcus Dean and Jasmine and second place was vlad and charlie but it was so close so they called it a tie.this is charlies perspective.
orienteering was so fun we say it was a tie because we worked together.then it started we all started at different times but when we started what a rush to all the clickers in full speed.then finally the last clicker number 16 next we all ran to the finish the two teams were so close that they called it a tie then we sat there and waited for the bus just amazed that we won.
thank you for reading this report on orienteering hope you liked it .By Charlie
wow i think you need a bit more work done come cheak out my blog
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regards,Kenza
i like the way you presented your work i sugetsed that you put more puncation i liked the story abd the dicrepeted language.
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