Welcome to this Room 11 blog. Our learning philosophy is to LEARN, CREATE an artifact that shows our learning, and then SHARE it in creative ways, including posting it here on this blog.The purpose of this blog is for students to become accustomed to sharing their learning, recieving feedback, and preparing them for having their very own blog.While students will make every effort to have work corrected and error free it is in fact authentic student work, showing where students are at, and so there are likely to be some mistakes. The aim is to note progress and improvement, and we expect to see this over time.
Dear Lucy,
ReplyDeleteWelcome to you new Blog Space.
Here are the rules for you to follow so you stay safe and enjoy your blogging.
-Only post using your first name.
-If you post photos of people related to your school work, only use first names in any cations or comments.
-No phone numbers or home addresses.
-If you get any unpleasant comments or posts that are disturbing we will talk an adult we trust.
I look forward to seeing your posts.
Mr Corlett
COCKATIELS
ReplyDeleteBy Lucy RM 11.
Cockatiels are a type of bird.
What do cockatiels look like?
These birds aren’t always the same colour. Some can be Grey, yellow or white.
They have 2 red dots on both sides of their face. (These dots are their cheeks)
Where are cockatiels from?
Cockatiels are native to Australia, but are now kept as pets all around the world.
Cockatiels actions and behaviour.
If you see a cockatiel back up into a corner, that means he or she is scared.
Cockatiels are easily tamed, so they are good to have as pets.
Most people would like a cockatiel as a pet because they are nice birds and of course are easily tamed.
Hi! Lucy,
ReplyDeleteI like the way you have put your work into your own words and you have checked your work especially the punctuation. Mr C
Your next step is to add your own picture ..... I wonder if you will draw it or if you will paint it using Art Rage? Or maybe a photo.
ReplyDeleteMaine Coon Cat Report
ReplyDeleteMaine Coon Cats
By Lucy-RM 11
This report is all about Maine Coons. Maine Coons are a breed of cat.
They are a type of domestic cat, and are usually long-haired.
I hope this report helps you learn about Maine Coon cats!
What they look like;
The Maine Coon cats that are long-haired tend to get VERY fluffy.
The way to tell that your cat’s breed is a Maine Coon, you should spot a mark on their forehead that looks like an M. The most common colour of a Maine Coon is a brown sort of tabby. They can come in a variety of different colours like Silver, camo and some other colours.
Where they are from;
The maine coon cat was originated in New England.
People from Europe brought their domestic cats with them.
Maine Coons are North America’s only longhaired, native cat.
How Maine Coons act/behave;
Maine Coons are good hunters.
They are always very interested in what human-beings do.
For example, if you’re washing the dishes, you’re Maine Coon will be very interested.
My Maine Coon cat likes to watch someone when they are sweeping in the kitchen with a broom.
I love my Maine Coon cat called Jemima because she thinks she is a human. She likes to sit on the couch with her belly showing. ← My cat Jemima
These are some of the sites I went to:
http://www.catster.com/cat-breeds/Maine_Coon
http://www.pinecoon.com/about_mainecoons.htm
It does not let me post a picture.
ReplyDeleteYou're right Lucy. I liked the idea you had of using an actual picture of YOUR Maine Coon cat as your illustration. Brilliant!
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ReplyDeleteI like the way you paragraph your work Lucy. I also like the way you have researched for information but then written it in your own words to express what you have learnt.
ReplyDeleteHi Lucy
ReplyDeleteYour report is really good. It gives us lots of information about the maine cat. There are a some errors in there like punctuation. I was really good Lucy .