Welcome to this Room 11 blog. Our learning philosophy is to LEARN, CREATE an artifact that shows our learning, and then SHARE it in creative ways, including posting it here on this blog.The purpose of this blog is for students to become accustomed to sharing their learning, recieving feedback, and preparing them for having their very own blog.While students will make every effort to have work corrected and error free it is in fact authentic student work, showing where students are at, and so there are likely to be some mistakes. The aim is to note progress and improvement, and we expect to see this over time.

Tuesday 4 June 2013


Crepper attack!

One day two miners named Adam and Sam they set of on a journey. Because a village was getting invaded by creepers and I don’t mean a little amount I mean a huge amount of creepers me and Sam were scared. we had not gone out to fight for a long time so they set of from their base from the nether so they said game mode 2 and they were on the surface  they felt pretty weird at first by about two hours after they felt better it was their dream of killing again they forgot how to kill but they still had a long way to go until they got to the village so as they set off in about 2 hours they were so tired they needed a coffee brake so they sat down a had there  coffee brake 1 hour later they were off again then thay walked for a another 5 hours they went through a village but that village was not the village they were looking for then it started to rain the two boys ran back to the village and built a nice house that they sold when thay set off again then the two boys started walking for 8 hours then thay were at the village the village was quiet the villagers were scared and we were to it was like a deserted island then BOOM there was a big creeper attack the villager was dead me and Sam were really  scared we were the scaredest  person in the hole of minecraft but we were at chilly not well i think then they all through that they were going to die they archly did not die but they were close to but they dived away so they got there butter swords  they were stabbing they were slicing  they were blowing up then they saved the village and they live happily ever after

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4 comments:

  1. Anonymous4 June 2013 at 19:46

    cool just cheek the spelling

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  2. Anonymous4 June 2013 at 20:14

    Adam. Your spelling need a bit of work so does your capitals and full stops all need work. On the good side what a great story about mine craft. Well done!! From Your Sister HANNAH!!

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  3. Anonymous5 June 2013 at 19:53

    good a bit long though i think that you need a part one and a part two other than that good just remember to check spelling

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  4. Anonymous12 June 2013 at 13:47

    Emily says "How can anything about mine craft be good. In a good way." Adam edit you stories before posting them. FROM HANNAH

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