Welcome to this Room 11 blog. Our learning philosophy is to LEARN, CREATE an artifact that shows our learning, and then SHARE it in creative ways, including posting it here on this blog.The purpose of this blog is for students to become accustomed to sharing their learning, recieving feedback, and preparing them for having their very own blog.While students will make every effort to have work corrected and error free it is in fact authentic student work, showing where students are at, and so there are likely to be some mistakes. The aim is to note progress and improvement, and we expect to see this over time.

Tuesday 4 June 2013



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               And the battle with Noch      
                  and book 2
One day Steve got kill by some zombies. When the three people called Ethan Adam Sam and Dylan
                              Hired about Steve they were patter filed.

Ethan pet pig was so scared he fainted Adam said is he died Ethan said no    
    Chapter 2                          
 Ethan pig!!!
                                      
                                                  2 weeks later!!
Ethan mining for butterand in the cave
 Suddly he farted and a pesi of butterfell from the sky
‘’yay’’ said Ethan.
Went Ethan mined a block of butterhe saw Dylan
                                               Ih said Dylan in a
Nuver mine. Hello? Said Ethan.
How are you i am Dylan



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My name is Ethan and i love mining for butter
.my friends and i are trying to find noch.
                                         Dylan said i know where noch is  on a montin in south east.
Hes is in the tempele of noch i can show you how to get in.we need 4 butter ok said Ethan quick  said Ethan .
Adam said ‘’ we need to get 4 gold’’ Ethan said ‘’ do you mean butter. ‘’ yes I mean butter’’ said Adam.So thay set off to the monton where noch temple is.
On the way thay found more butter so when thay got there thay did not know what to do so thay called the wise miner his name skye. Hae called him and told him that we did not know what to do so we did what we got told to you need to throw in all of the butter never said ethan.

So ethan ran in to the forest droping all his butter so Adam was following  him and also picking up the butter. Adam found a salter in the forest so Adam called sam and said “ i found a shelter so when he finished the words it started to rain sam ran to the shelter and waited for 2 hours.

2 hours later
When the rain stoped, thay ran to Noch temple he throw all of the butter in the temple but we did not get to go in the temple but we threw in all of ourbutter  oh thats right we did not get the diamond we need 4 diamond.ok let mine for it ok said Adam but then sam said but we don’t have any butter oh so thats why you stoped mining yes.So what are we going to do i know we will we will mine for butter to. and diamond yes and diamond .

So thay mined for 4 hours thay found all thebutter but only 3 diamod and thay were tirerd  so thay had a coffee  brake so thay were having the longest coffee brake ever but at the end of the coffee brake thay mined a block and boom thay found diamond thay were pleased thay went to the temple of noch thay threw the diamond and butter into the temple and yay thay got in thay saw noch but thay were’t ready so thay got smacked in the face then thay were ready thay had there diamond sowrd so thay started to hit noch but then his garde the iron golim so thay backed away slowey but Adam was’t scared so he started to hit the iron golim then in three hits liter the iron golim was dead yes said Adam . now we only need to kill noch and in about 19 hits he was dead so thay had to find ethan so thay went in the forest and sam started to call ethanwhere are you we herd a voice in the disdise we herd ethan say help im geting taken away we are coming stay  there ok i will try so  thay ran as fast as thay could and thay got at the smallest villige in the hole of mine caft sam and Adam looked in all of the house and we saw him trading butter         with a villager    he was trading for diamond Adam was all like wow and Sam was all like weird I was surprised  as he had his face was all puffed  up i was scared to death because he tort we would not have many  
butter       left     but thay were all all good about ethan trading butter                       
                                                                                 And thay said to ethan its time to come home now

The end 

1 comment:

  1. Hi! Adam,
    I found your story really hard to follow but it is good that you are writing and posting. Be careful about using names of people in the class as it can cause offense if you do it without first showing them what you write.
    Your next step is to include punctuation - capitals and full stops so it breaks your words into sentences. Remember that I is I, not i. Also use the spell checker to support your writing. Words like they /they would show up as errors. Have a chat to me about the WordQ program as I think it would really be a help to you.

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