And the battle with Noch
and book 2
One day Steve got kill by some zombies. When the three
people called Ethan Adam Sam and Dylan
Hired about Steve they were patter filed.
Ethan pet pig was so scared he fainted Adam said is he died
Ethan said no
Chapter 2
Ethan pig!!!
2 weeks later!!
Ethan mining for and in the cave
Suddly he farted and a pesi of fell from the sky
‘’yay’’ said
Ethan.
Went Ethan
mined a block of he saw Dylan
Ih said Dylan in a
Nuver mine.
Hello? Said Ethan.
How are you i
am Dylan
My name is
Ethan and i love mining for .my friends and i are
trying to find noch.
Dylan
said i know where noch is on a montin in
south east.
Hes is in the
tempele of noch i can show you how to get in.we need 4 ok said Ethan quick said Ethan .
Adam said ‘’
we need to get 4 gold’’ Ethan said ‘’ do you mean . ‘’ yes I mean butter’’ said Adam.So
thay set off to the monton where noch temple is.
On the way
thay found more so when thay got there thay did not know what
to do so thay called the wise miner his name skye. Hae called him and told him
that we did not know what to do so we did what we got told to you need to throw
in all of the butter never said ethan.
So ethan ran
in to the forest droping all his so Adam was following him and also picking up the . Adam found a salter in the
forest so Adam called sam and said “ i found a shelter so when he finished the
words it started to rain sam ran to the shelter and waited for 2 hours.
2 hours later
When the rain
stoped, thay ran to Noch temple he throw all of the in the temple but we did not get to go in the
temple but we threw in all of our
oh thats right we did not get the diamond we need 4 diamond.ok let mine
for it ok said Adam but then sam said but we don’t have any oh so thats why you stoped mining yes.So what
are we going to do i know we will we will mine for to. and diamond yes and diamond .
So thay mined
for 4 hours thay found all the but only 3 diamod and thay were
tirerd so thay had a coffee brake so thay were having the longest coffee
brake ever but at the end of the coffee brake thay mined a block and boom thay
found diamond thay were pleased thay went to the temple of noch thay threw the
diamond and into the temple and yay thay got in thay saw
noch but thay were’t ready so thay got smacked in the face then thay were ready
thay had there diamond sowrd so thay started to hit noch but then his garde the
iron golim so thay backed away slowey but Adam was’t scared so he started to
hit the iron golim then in three hits liter the iron golim was dead yes said
Adam . now we only need to kill noch and in about 19 hits he was dead so thay
had to find ethan so thay went in the forest and sam started to call ethanwhere
are you we herd a voice in the disdise we herd ethan say help im geting taken
away we are coming stay there ok i will
try so thay ran as fast as thay could
and thay got at the smallest villige in the hole of mine caft sam and Adam looked in all of the house and we saw him trading with a villager he was trading for diamond Adam was all like
wow and Sam was all like weird I was surprised
as he had his face was all puffed
up i was scared to death because he tort we would not have many
left but thay were all all good about ethan
trading
And thay said to ethan its time to come home now
The end
Hi! Adam,
ReplyDeleteI found your story really hard to follow but it is good that you are writing and posting. Be careful about using names of people in the class as it can cause offense if you do it without first showing them what you write.
Your next step is to include punctuation - capitals and full stops so it breaks your words into sentences. Remember that I is I, not i. Also use the spell checker to support your writing. Words like they /they would show up as errors. Have a chat to me about the WordQ program as I think it would really be a help to you.