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Tuesday 4 June 2013

the Hawaii dream
it was July forth 2012 Hawaii as the firework go off on Oahu. high above at 50,000 feet a 747 is preparing to land on the reef runway 40,000 30,000 20,000 , 10,000 9,000 8,000............. touch down .the com link crackled to life you are to disembark at gate 65 thank you. as we grab our bags and get of i look at the plane and think wow.................
as w arrive at the hotel we put down our bags and go to the  ocean man was exited.

the water is warm and it is fun to swim it may be five but it  is fun as i hop out of the ocean i realize that the sun is setting on diamond head the sun setts it is a sight to behold . then Emerson calls me over he says that we are going to a place called the outrigger for dinner ya as of course i have to get changed .........as i ride though Hawaii i see  the ocean once we get there i  order chicken soup ..............then i see my room it was a dream aw that's going to be real a week from Saturday

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  1. Anonymous4 June 2013 at 19:32

    me like hawaii

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  2. Anonymous5 June 2013 at 19:52

    Cool story. It's exciting, but next time don't forget to capitalize the letters after full stops.

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