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Monday 3 June 2013

The Dance Comp
Would you feel calm before you had to perform a dance in front of four hundred people,  and three judges. Surprisingly I did. I had done this before in front of more than one thousand people. It was scary.
I danced with four other people there names are Jack, Cody, Ryan and André.
We danced to mixed music. First it was barmy then the Harman shake then a cool song but I don’t know what the name of the song is but it’s a very cool song.
When we went on we were fine but when we started we were freaked. There were more people than we thought. Ryan was the scariest person in on the stage because he did not know it as much as us other guys. J
By Adam Room 11

 May 7, 2013   
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4 comments:

  1. Anonymous3 June 2013 at 19:46

    HI NICE STORY

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  2. Mr Corlett3 June 2013 at 22:20

    Hi! Adam,
    I liked this story because it is a good recount of what you did. You had a range of different sentences of different lengths and you didn't start all "Next....." By the way .... is it "Harman Shake" or "Harlem Shake"? Mr C

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    1. Anonymous4 June 2013 at 16:06

      I think it is Harlem Shake but cool story!
      I have never danced in front of people but when I was about 3 or 4 I did singing with my best friend Ashley in front of people.

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  3. Anonymous4 June 2013 at 19:06

    cool:}

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