Orienteering for waikanae school.
By Madeline young
On the 25th of June 2013 year 5,s and 6,s from Waikanae school went to Waikanae rugby field for orienteering. When they got there they rushed to find a partner and line up to start. Off they went in pairs running through ditches and horse paddocks looking for clippers.
Hannah guy said “my favorite part was running and seeing 3 clippers at a time other than petting a horse.”she exclaimed.
Dear Maddie,
ReplyDeleteI liked that the photo you chose matched your story.
Your next step is to put a capital for proper nouns - such as your last name and Hannah's, and W for Waikanae. I also think it needed more information to be a full report - such as the fact that other schools were there and what orienteering is.
I liked the way you put in a quote to make your report more interesting.