Orienteering for waikanae school.
By Madeline young
Hannah guy said “my favorite part was running and seeing 3 clippers at a time other than petting a horse.”she exclaimed.
This is an exciting blog from Room 11 children giving them the opportunity to learn, create and share their discoveries.
Dear Maddie,
ReplyDeleteI liked that the photo you chose matched your story.
Your next step is to put a capital for proper nouns - such as your last name and Hannah's, and W for Waikanae. I also think it needed more information to be a full report - such as the fact that other schools were there and what orienteering is.
I liked the way you put in a quote to make your report more interesting.