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Monday 29 July 2013

the quake that rocked new zealand 

 On the 20th of July a six point four rocked new Zealand. some 360 quakes have rocked new zealand since
some have passed unfelt others were felt.

It was 5:07 when i felt it.

It was 5:00 i was in Marlborough reading dive dive dive a book about sumarimes 5:01.I turned  the page the  the fire crackled. Mum called snacks i stood up i took a salmon&cream cheese ate it and then i ate 5 more.
5:05 i returned to my arm chair and my book.5:06 from then on it felt like hours.The fire crackeld 5:07

Then it started the p waves had struck 10 seconds of the p-waves a five second stop  then the s-waves hit
20 seconds o the s-waves it stopped.

now i now that white island has been raised to yellow.And that the Interiland ferry had felt it to sailing just 1 km from the epicenter.      

it only felt like turbulence to me
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2 comments:

  1. Anonymous29 July 2013 at 16:34

    I liked the story allot it was great.But the punctuation was not that good and i could not understand some of it. It is all goods you can fix it. I really liked it Great work.

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  2. Anonymous29 July 2013 at 16:38

    hi duncan i really liked your story but i can't understand stand the story but it's was a cool story

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