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Tuesday 30 July 2013

The big startling shake

      The big startling shack
 30,7,13 By Hannah
     
On Sunday the 21st of July at 5.09 a 6.5 earthquake started in Seddon south of Wellington. There were a series of earthquakes from the very beginning of Sunday morning right to the very last light on Sunday afternoon. There were lots of small and high level earthquakes but this was the biggest of them all. It coursed some damage like some shattered windows and some cracks in buildings. Damage occurred in the lower north island and the upper South island. The rest of the country felt it but didn't find any damage.
It startled lots of people. I was a little sick when the quake hit so I thought it was me but after a bit I knew it was an earthquake. I ran to the door and stayed there until it was over. After the earthquake lots of people where at the shops stocking up on their survival kits in case there was another one as big. Scientists say that it is unlikely that there will be another one as big but there is still a chance.
It was quit frightening but exciting at the same time. It is an experience I won’t forget, not for a while anyway.

By Hannah
  


  
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7 comments:

  1. Anonymous30 July 2013 at 16:16

    your story is good i like the conclution :)

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  2. Anonymous30 July 2013 at 16:42

    this is a good recount. but the title has a spelling mistake. but to fix that is no problem. just edit it. keep up the good work :)

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  3. Anonymous30 July 2013 at 16:43

    i like the story very much it makes sense has a lot puctation and it is a good report

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  4. Anonymous30 July 2013 at 16:44

    i like your story but wheres the punctuation!!!

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  5. Anonymous30 July 2013 at 17:02

    Thanks Ioana you are relly cool.

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  6. Anonymous30 July 2013 at 17:12

    The one above this one is the one I edited have a look at that one.

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  7. Anonymous25 August 2013 at 17:18

    oh i was about to say "please change your last word on your tittle

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