The
big startling shack
30,7,13 By Hannah
On Sunday
the 21st of July at 5.09 a 6.5 earthquake started in Seddon south of
Wellington. There were a series of earthquakes from the very beginning of
Sunday morning right to the very last light on Sunday afternoon. There were
lots of small and high level earthquakes but this was the biggest of them all.
It coursed some damage like some shattered windows and some cracks in
buildings. Damage occurred in the lower north island and the upper South island.
The rest of the country felt it but didn't find any damage.
It startled
lots of people. I was a little sick when the quake hit so I thought it was me
but after a bit I knew it was an earthquake. I ran to the door and stayed there
until it was over. After the earthquake lots of people where at the shops
stocking up on their survival kits in case there was another one as big.
Scientists say that it is unlikely that there will be another one as big but
there is still a chance.
It was quit
frightening but exciting at the same time. It is an experience I won’t forget,
not for a while anyway.
By Hannah
your story is good i like the conclution :)
ReplyDeletethis is a good recount. but the title has a spelling mistake. but to fix that is no problem. just edit it. keep up the good work :)
ReplyDeletei like the story very much it makes sense has a lot puctation and it is a good report
ReplyDeletei like your story but wheres the punctuation!!!
ReplyDeleteThanks Ioana you are relly cool.
ReplyDeleteThe one above this one is the one I edited have a look at that one.
ReplyDeleteoh i was about to say "please change your last word on your tittle
ReplyDelete