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Monday 29 July 2013

The first earthquake I have felt

I was in a town by  Mount Ruapehu   when the earthquake happened.

My brother,mum and dad were in the lounge of the place we were staying. and i was on my bed reading when the earthquake started.

The bed started to move lightly and kept going only for a little bit though.

The earthquake was not that strong by mont rupua but I imagine that it would be a lot stronger closer to the epicentre. 


By Teneka
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8 comments:

  1. Anonymous29 July 2013 at 16:51

    good punctuation.
    its a bit to short.

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    1. Anonymous30 July 2013 at 16:42

      thanks i had nothing else to write

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  2. Anonymous29 July 2013 at 16:53

    first time for an earthquake thats cool

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  3. Anonymous29 July 2013 at 16:56

    this story this is a short story you should make it longer

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  4. Anonymous30 July 2013 at 16:56

    cool story tj

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  5. tiff.tee.mo30 July 2013 at 21:22

    I enjoyed reading your story and look forward to finding out how you felt after your first quake experience! :)

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