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Monday 29 July 2013

 The quake shake
On Sunday 20th of July a 6.8 earthquake hit .I am going to tell you my story and where I was.
5 minutes before the quake I was in the car with my friend and his dad we went in got some food and looked at the magazines there where know new ones when we walked past the wine bottle’s  all of them where shaking ting.
The earthquake hit we left the groceries and ran outside to the car park. Everybody was looking at us thinking what are you doing but we were just getting away from anything falling nothing fell we were lucky.
After that we got our grocers we went home to cheque on our survival kit in case of an aftershock. Then we cheque if our families .         and friends are ok.

Now it was time to relax and hope for no more shakes. 
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3 comments:

  1. Anonymous29 July 2013 at 16:41

    Hi charlie cool story it was awesome

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  2. Anonymous30 July 2013 at 17:16

    hi charles nice story you may need to change it to make sence a little bit byyyyyyyyyyyyeeeeeeeeeeee

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  3. Mr Corlett18 August 2013 at 23:05

    Hi! Charlie,
    I'm glad everyone was OK. You need to check what you write.....
    You wrote "there where know new ones when we walked past the wine bottle’s all of them where shaking ting." Read it carefully - Does this make sense?
    Checking your work for errors should be a relatively easy task by now. To get the best comments you need to correct as many errors as possible. I think we might get a few more quakes in the next week or so. What do you think?
    Regards,
    Mr Corlett

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