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Monday 16 September 2013

10 things to find

WALT write lists using commas instead of the word ''and''.



10 Things you might find in a lunchbox.

by Joe
In a lunchbox you might find sandwiches, apples, oranges, bananas, cookies, muesli bars, biscuits, pies, mandarins, a cracker and a pear.

10 Things you might find in a school bag.
a lunch box, a soccer ball, a hockey stick, a library book that's over due, a jacket, a dice, a pencil, a lost homework book, a pen and some shoes.

5 Things you might find in a super market
you could find a jar of jam, a cereal box, a box of ice-cream, a drink bottle, and some lollies.

By Joe
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1 comment:

  1. Unknown19 September 2013 at 15:15

    good work joe. just saying you would find more than one cracker in a lunchbox

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