Welcome to this Room 11 blog. Our learning philosophy is to LEARN, CREATE an artifact that shows our learning, and then SHARE it in creative ways, including posting it here on this blog.The purpose of this blog is for students to become accustomed to sharing their learning, recieving feedback, and preparing them for having their very own blog.While students will make every effort to have work corrected and error free it is in fact authentic student work, showing where students are at, and so there are likely to be some mistakes. The aim is to note progress and improvement, and we expect to see this over time.

Sunday 15 September 2013

power letter
Seddon st
Waikanae School
Kapiti Coast


Dear Rooms 7 and 16


Hi, this is Adam , Ethan and Sam and we want you to turn power off during playtimes and if you're not using them. The problem is that this school is wasting power and money so turn of all your power while morning tea and lunch!!!



We discovered that there are up to 235 classroom lights are left on and over 123 desktops computers screens left on and there are also the staff room lights and computers that wastes a lot of power.     
So we should turn them off so we can buy
more sport gear and more fun stuff and art equipment for the school.
So can you please turn off all of your lights and computers at morning tea and lunch time and  we can save power and money for the school. Then we can buy more cool stuff.So please turn off the power at morning tea and lunch times.



Room 15 was using a lot of power because there is 11 desktops and 24 lights that are left on!!! A day so please turn of all the light
at morning tea and lunch times and we will  save power to buy more fun stuff and sport gear for the school.



So join us and turn off all of your power to save our money and thanks for reading!




By Adam, Ethan and Sam
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2 comments:

  1. Mr Corlett15 September 2013 at 04:53

    Dear Sam and team,
    I have deleted your original post and re-posted your content. You had posted with font 24 instead of 12. You also had lots of blank pages which left a lot of space after your post before the next person's post.

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  2. Anonymous19 September 2013 at 16:18

    I really like it's Awesome but you should put the Sincerely part Instead of By Adam, Ethan and Sam.

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