Welcome to this Room 11 blog. Our learning philosophy is to LEARN, CREATE an artifact that shows our learning, and then SHARE it in creative ways, including posting it here on this blog.The purpose of this blog is for students to become accustomed to sharing their learning, recieving feedback, and preparing them for having their very own blog.While students will make every effort to have work corrected and error free it is in fact authentic student work, showing where students are at, and so there are likely to be some mistakes. The aim is to note progress and improvement, and we expect to see this over time.

Wednesday, 11 September 2013
Jasmine and Liezel Rm 6
Waikanae school
Seddon St
Kapiti coast
Wednesday 4th September 2013
Dear Room 21
.
"Hi we are Jasmine and Liezel" ,and we are here to speak about how much power you use and how much power you  can save.
Room 6 is doing a survey about how much power you have been using during lunch times over the last 5 weeks, we have been doing the survey while you guys have been outside playing on sunny days around in the time you do not need to use power.


Do you want to help the world live longer and be a hero then start turning off lights computers and heaters and all electronics that don’t need to be used. Just think about how much power you use a day and how much power you can save. If people continue to think this way then the world will not be as good as it could be. So spread the word to save power and be a hero. I believe that
if people change the world will be  better place.



The amount of power been used on heaters 75% on and 25% off so that is not as good as we could do. I believe we can improve so turn off heaters when they are not needed. Also we have tallied how much power is used on projectors, 75% on, 20% off and 5% has no projector. So try to improve in what you can.
All of yous should improve because the money you save by turning off power stuff, could be spent on sports gear or more fun trips to go on.
have you  ever wondered how electricity is made you may be surprised that electricity comes from magnets. But  some power places have coal fired generation which use's a lot of coal and that is bad for earth. So the more you save power the less coal gets burned and the better the world is.
So remember to to turn off lights and electronics, remember even a switch left on can use power. Just think about all that power you can save. Thank you  for listening.  
Your sincerely
Liezel and Jasmine



 This is room 21 with there lights on.
Oh look Mrs McKenzie turned off the light, they must have the best teacher ever!!!!
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2 comments:

  1. Mr Corlett11 September 2013 at 15:20

    Hi! Good to see you have posted your work.
    Your next step is to put the salutation on the left side (Dear Room 21). As it is their title, the word Room has a capital. Where you have "playing around in..." it would be good to make it clearer by saying "...playing around outside in ..." Also check for capitals - So your main focus is proof reading.

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  2. Mr Corlett11 September 2013 at 15:29

    Your proof reading is going well - I like your improvements. AWESOME!

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