Welcome to this Room 11 blog. Our learning philosophy is to LEARN, CREATE an artifact that shows our learning, and then SHARE it in creative ways, including posting it here on this blog.The purpose of this blog is for students to become accustomed to sharing their learning, recieving feedback, and preparing them for having their very own blog.While students will make every effort to have work corrected and error free it is in fact authentic student work, showing where students are at, and so there are likely to be some mistakes. The aim is to note progress and improvement, and we expect to see this over time.

Wednesday, 6 November 2013

jack and jill

Jack and Jill
:characters jack Jill mom narrator
:Jack Jill i don't think it is safe to go up this hill
: Jill its fine nothing will go wrong  
:narrator jack and Jill go up the hill and get a bucket of water
:narrator  jack falls down and breaks his crown  
:narrator and Jill comes tumbling after
:Jack wow ow ow ow ow ow ow my head!!
:Jill jack ill save you ow ow ow wee barrel roll.
:Jack omg Jill is going to crush me ow!!!!
:mom kids i told you to be careful when climbing that blasted hill now go to your  room narrator :the end
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