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Wednesday 6 November 2013

            Jack and Jill
Author Charlie
Jack
Jill
Mum
Dad
Narrator:Jack and Jill were sent up the hill to get a pail of water from the well.

Dad:   See you soon.
Mum:   Keep safe -  don’t forget the bucket.  
Jill: Ok bye.  I’ll get the bucket from behind the cottage. I’m back.
Jack: lets go.
Jill: Yea the faster the better
norator:So jack and jill went up the hill.
Jill: Oh finally were here ill grab the water.
Norater: Jack slips.
Jack:Oh no help ahhhhhhh.
Jill: I am coming
Norator:Jill races down the hill with the water.
Jack:Oh oh my head.
Jill: Comon lets get you home.
Norator:Mum comes out.
Mum: What happened.
Jack:I fell over.
Dad:Lets get you patched up.

The end
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2 comments:

  1. Anonymous21 November 2013 at 13:01

    this play could of been a bit longer

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  2. Mr Corlett27 November 2013 at 13:09

    Hi! Charlie - remember to put the SCENE at the start. Good to see your title, name and character list.

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