Welcome to this Room 11 blog. Our learning philosophy is to LEARN, CREATE an artifact that shows our learning, and then SHARE it in creative ways, including posting it here on this blog.The purpose of this blog is for students to become accustomed to sharing their learning, recieving feedback, and preparing them for having their very own blog.While students will make every effort to have work corrected and error free it is in fact authentic student work, showing where students are at, and so there are likely to be some mistakes. The aim is to note progress and improvement, and we expect to see this over time.

Tuesday 29 October 2013

Jack and Jill
characters:

:Jack

:Jill

:mother



scene: Jack and jill were in the house with there mother and they wanted to help out.
Mother: Hey jack and jill why don't you go up the hills to grab some water.
Jack: Ok ya thats a good idea race you to the top.
Scene: Jack and jill race up the hill and Jack said 123go and of they went.
Jack: come on jill.



Scene: Jack and jill got some water and then jack said.



Jack: ahhhhhhhhhhhh i think i cracked my crown.



Jill: Jack i am coming for you.
Sence: Then jill slipped and got the bucket on her head and then she went rolling down the hill.



Jack: jill are you all right.



sence: Then Jack sated pulling the bucket out of her head.



Jill: Are you alright too.



Jack: yes i am oh ok lets go home.
THE END.
By drenna and ioana.
Posted by at

No comments:

Post a Comment

Subscribe to: Post Comments (Atom)