Welcome to this Room 11 blog. Our learning philosophy is to LEARN, CREATE an artifact that shows our learning, and then SHARE it in creative ways, including posting it here on this blog.The purpose of this blog is for students to become accustomed to sharing their learning, recieving feedback, and preparing them for having their very own blog.While students will make every effort to have work corrected and error free it is in fact authentic student work, showing where students are at, and so there are likely to be some mistakes. The aim is to note progress and improvement, and we expect to see this over time.
The Dance Comp
ReplyDeleteWould you feel calm before you had to perform a dance in front of four hundred people, and three judges. Surprisingly I did. I had done this before in front of more than one thousand people. It was scary.
I danced with four other people there names are Jack, Cody, Ryan and André.
We danced to mixed music. First it was barmy then the Harman shake then a cool song but I don’t know what the name of the song is but it’s a very cool song.
When we went on we were fine but when we started we were freaked. There were more people than we thought. Ryan was the scariest person in on the stage because he did not know it as much as us other guys.
By Adam Room 11
May 7, 2013
nice work
ReplyDeleteI liked the way you started your story with a question as it adds interest and hooks the reader in. - Mr C
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